Talk:Ali Abu Nuwar/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
No copyvio/dablink/external link issues. Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- Mind adding the name of the memoirs?
- Maybe wikilink blood cancer?
- Military career
- Wikilink "Emir"
- As ADC, Abu Nuwar was a major influence over then-20 year old Hussein Anything more on this?
- The prose is excellent, I can not find any flaws that need to be corrected.
- Later career
- What is the Eisenhower Doctrine?
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)