Talk:All Around the World (Justin Bieber song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 11:20, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

General

• Dead link

Lead

• It was written and produced by Adam Messinger and Nasri of The Messengers and Sir Nolan, while Bieber and Ludacris, the song's guest feature, wrote additional lyrics. → It was written by Bieber, Sir Nolan and Nasri of The Messengers in collaboration with Ludacris, who guest features.
• but reached → reaching

Background and composition

• while Bieber and Ludacris, the song's guest feature, wrote additional lyrics. → This is really unclear, it sounds like the are both features and that there is no lead artist. Apply what I suggested above.
• I know Eurodance is sourced in the info box, but it seems strange not to include it in the Composition info?

Reception

• I'd say from one of the first reviews, it is also a synth-pop song?
• out of five stars, commented → out of five stars, and commented
• The chart performance section is tiny. Just from reading this, it sounds like it only charted in five countries without looking at the table. This could be expanded to cover US, Europe and Oceania in more detail. Debut, peak and how many weeks charting.

Track listing

• Not needed, only one version.

Charts

• 2012 peaks should be in a separate table to 2013 peaks.

Release history

• Being given digital download makes it a single, not a promo single. Promo singles are free and cannot chart. So this is questionable.

The Region column needs the same shaded mark up as the Charts table.

Refs

• The first one isn't even formatted.
• Ref 3 needs linking for MTV and Viacom
• Ref 7 therefore needs unlinking

External links

• Some sort of red link All Around the World template needs removing.

Status

On hold  — ₳aron 21:32, 1 September 2013 (UTC)

All  Done. Jorn ^talk 00:09, 2 September 2013 (UTC)

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