Talk:All My People/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:28, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Looks good

Lead

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• Link music critics please to the article "Music journalism"
• Link YouTube
• You could mention something about the song's commercial success (or non-success)

Background and reception

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• Could you reword this sentence: "Stan made the release of new material public through her Facebook account, following which she posted the audio of "All My People" on Soundcloud.[4][1]" The second half of the sentence is confusing to me...
• "alert rhythm and less lyrics" --> "alert rhythm and minimal lyrics"
• "Lemonade" wasn't her previous single; "Cliche (Hush, Hush)" was

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• I'd make this it's own section, so title in "Critical reception" and the one above "Background"
• Reword "Kevin Apaza, writing for Direct Lyrics, called the single very "catchy", naming it different from the "stuff" she had released before.[1] He went on into saying that he "just [doesn't] see [the track] as a European monster hit" and confessed that its lyrics and the video concept didn't "make much sense".[1]" to "Kevin Apaza, writing for Direct Lyrics, called the single very "catchy", naming it different from the "stuff" she had released before; he went on into saying that he "just [doesn't] see [the track] as a European monster hit" and confessed that its lyrics and the video concept didn't "make much sense".[1]" to reduce the redundancy of the same source

Promotion and music video

• Great work

Track listing

• The "Digital remixes EP" should have its own separate track listing, much much like "Make Me Like You" does (for example)

Charts

• Change column header of "Chart (2013-2014)" to "Chart (2013–14)"
• In the suggestion directly above, make sure you use a "n-dash" and not a "hyphen"
• Use the correct chart formatting located with help at this article (Template:Single chart); if you need help with this, let me know (I'd be happy to do it for you.) (Plus the Japan Hot 100 has no closing parentheses)

Release history

• The United States' release date came first, so please add it as the first country in that chart
• If the US release date is true, then the true release date of the single in 28 March 2013, not 1 May 2013

End of GA Review:

On hold for seven days. Just some minor things and corrections; great work as always! Good luck and cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:34, 10 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Done everything apart from the chart formatting, as the official sites for the singles charts do not have the chart peaks. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 03:38, 11 June 2016 (UTC)