Talk:Alyssa Nicole Pallett

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Not pornography[edit]

Alyssa Pallett is not a nude model, and no pornographic photos of her can be found online. Her role in American Pie as the "porn chick" was a comedic acting role, and is not a real porn star. Her appearance in "The Girls Next Door" was also non-pornographic. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brigitteslips (talkcontribs) 20:56, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

question about COI[edit]

Can someone please inform on how to understand the note on my article stating: "A major contributor to this article appears to have a conflict of interest with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page." I need to know how to improve the neutral point of view apparently, not sure what needs to be fixed on the article in order to comply better with content policies. Any help greatly appreciated! --Brigitteslips (talk) 22:08, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to make the article more neutral, mostly by removing excess linking and marginal references. the language is fine as far as i can see, just the overall presentation looked a little promotional. one link for each article linked to is very important WMOS. also, the repetition of information in each section is probably not needed for a stub article. you probably arent really COI, unless you have a stake in her business. but being a fan means just being aware this is an encyco article not a fan page(which it doesnt sound like anyway). but aside from some bad links, which show more of a lack of familiarity than bias, the article is fine by me. Mercurywoodrose (talk) 06:44, 2 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]