Talk:Andaaz/GA1
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Reviewer: Kailash29792 (talk · contribs) 16:17, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
Not much to say, just two questions:
- Are you sure Andaaz means evaluation? In the context of the film, how? I always thought it meant style. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:44, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- The song "Kisi Se Tum Pyaar Karo" describes the method of evaluating love by analyzing characteristics, making judgement and the outcomes which fits the exact definition of evaluation. Both Kumar and Dutta's characters face outcomes of not opening about their love as they were way too analytical of their friendship and love, I think.Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- "the film centers around an" – I'd go with revolves around. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:44, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- Done.Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
Production[edit]
- "Raj Kanwar approached Suneel Darshan" - Would it be good to mention "Suneel Darshan of Shree Krishna International" here? Because the production company hasn't yet been mentioned except for the infobox. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:44, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- Done.Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- "The pairing of Chopra and Kumar has proven to be particularly effective, with all of their collaborations being box office successes" - Not noteworthy for this section I guess. Perhaps for another section like "Release and reception" or "Impact". Kailash29792 (talk) 05:44, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- I have added this in "Impact" section but do you think more stuff can be added there other then their pairing? Like how Chopra went on to become a huge name in Bollywood and is doing Hollywood now? Same for Dutta who had also a fairly successful career. Also should this "Following the release of their last film together, several attempts have been made by different producers and directors to bring the pair again in films but the attempts did not come to fruition" be there?Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- To quote a legend, just do it. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:01, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- Kailash29792 Done.Krish | Talk To Me 14:36, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- To quote a legend, just do it. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:01, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- I have added this in "Impact" section but do you think more stuff can be added there other then their pairing? Like how Chopra went on to become a huge name in Bollywood and is doing Hollywood now? Same for Dutta who had also a fairly successful career. Also should this "Following the release of their last film together, several attempts have been made by different producers and directors to bring the pair again in films but the attempts did not come to fruition" be there?Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
Soundtrack[edit]
- "Andaaz's soundtrack was composed by the Indian music duo Nadeem–Shravan" - Indian not so necessary IMO, unless they are from a different country. Kailash29792 (talk) 05:44, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
- Done.Krish | Talk To Me 09:32, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
Nothing else to say. Just that, despite your long hiatus, you still got gas in the tank. And that means pass, so congratulations! Kailash29792 (talk) 14:02, 28 March 2020 (UTC)