Talk:Anticipating/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: --Legolas ^(talk2me) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

I will be reviewing the song article against GA criteria. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   See below

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   See below

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   See below

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

OK. The prose and MOS issues are the main concerns. Here are they.

Lead  Done

1. "Anticipating" is a song by American recording artist Britney Spears from her third studio album Britney. --> There should be a comma after Spears.
2. written by Spears and produced --> "while" in place of "and"
3. Madonna and Rick Astley needs to be wikilinked.
4. comma after 2002.
5. Avoid continuous repetition of the phrase "The song".

Background  Done

1. and produced by --> ", while produced by"
2. The song was mixed at the latter studio by Stephen George --> Rephrase
3. the song is written in the key of F major --> So wrong. A song can't be written in a key of music. It is composed in a key.

Reception  Done

1. No need to two subsections as the chart performance consists of just one line. Combine them into a single section.

Live performance

1. The performance began a video interlude --> 'with a video interlude
2. appeared onstage --> comma after onstage

Tracklising  Done

1. Unsourced
2. en-dash is upposed to be used

References  Done

1. Online sources like MTV etc are not to be italicized.
2. En-dash in place of normal dashes.
3. No caps in the title of references.

External link  Done

1. WP:SPAM link. Doesnot contain anything related to the song. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

Image  Done

1. File:Anticipating music video.jpg is a blantant violation of WP:NFCC for living person as it is directly from the tour, for which a free replaceable image is easily available.

There are currently no free replaceable images from the performance. Should i remove the image anyway? Xwomanizerx (talk) 17:35, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

Yes. If no free image is available at presetn, then remove it. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 03:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Done. Xwomanizerx (talk) 19:58, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

I'm keeping the article on hold for seven days to resolve the issues. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

I'm passing this article. --Legolas ^(talk2me) 05:08, 23 March 2010 (UTC)