Talk:Apistogramma panduro
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Hello. I think the article needs subheadings for the topics described, such as origin, maintenance, etc. It would make the article more appealing and less cluttered. Also, instead of citing solely the URL's from the sources you used, make a reference list instead. This will again, make the article more appealing. Under the second maintenance, explain why live foods are best when feeding these fish. All in all, the article is very informative! Good work. Patronus07 (talk) 18:01, 6 April 2017 (UTC)
Hello! I'd first like to say I agree with the comment above about creating subheadings, it will create a clear structure to the article allowing it to look more organized. To create subheadings use two == the word along with two more ==. I think overall you have really great facts. The lead section provides useful information regarding this species, with neutral content. There were a few places where I felt like the information could belong to another subsection, such as "Live foods are best when breeding these fish", this sentence is in the maintenance, but I feel like should be in the breeding section. One other suggestion that I have for you is to just reread it, there are a few sentences that are hard to read, such as "Fry will normally easily take newly hatched brine shrimp and the level of care is typical for the genus". Overall this article is really good, it needs a bit of organization, and like said above a reference section, but has really great information! Good job, keep up the good work! Lizanderson309 (talk) 02:11, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
Hey. I as mentioned in the previous comments all it needs is more organization like subheadings and a little bit of formatting like creating a reference list and cleaning up the citations. I also think that italicizing the scientific names would make it look nicer and easier to read. Other than that it has a lot of good information and is really educational. Good work!! Trevanian153 (talk) 23:32, 10 April 2017 (UTC)
Hi! I feel like I learned a lot about a fish I had never heard of while reading this article. However, there's quite a bit of information (e.g. the "Maintenance" section) that is not sourced at all. I think the article would benefit from more thorough references to source material.Cipherbug (talk) 19:10, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
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