Talk:Area 25 (Nevada National Security Site)

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B Class Comments[edit]

In terms of grammar and style, the article could use some smoothing and clarification. One example is "prototype nuclear rocket engines." Are these nuclear-powered engines or lift systems for delivering warheads? It's not in bad shape, really, but could use a little work. In terms of coverage, the article seems to lack context. There are also gaps in information. Why did Kennedy, for example, visit the site? The bit on Boyd seems slightly out of place as well. I don't know how much information there is out there to flesh out this sort of stuff, but it would be helpful I think. Other than that, I'd just say this is very close to what I consider B-Class. Intothat darkness 14:40, 6 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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