Talk:Art Rooney Jr./GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

That's all I think. Nice work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: This source from 1962 mentions him as public relations director - I could find mentions of him in that role from '61, '63 or '64, though - what would you suggest? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:04, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Adding all those sources. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:30, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - @WikiOriginal-9: Sorry, I meant to say that I couldn't find mentions of him in that role in those years. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:38, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - "and as the team's public relations director" change to "and also spending time as the team's public relations director"? Change infobox to say "Various roles"? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:03, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      - @WikiOriginal-9: Changed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:21, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:24, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]