Talk:Australia's First Families of Wine

Inappropriate tone

I find this article to be written too much in a "press release" tone, and it is in need of an overhaul and some pruning. Tomas e (talk) 12:14, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Have deleted/reworded some content + had another wikipedian attempt to edit article, more revision required in section mission statement, see links and references for material. SpringSummerAutumn (talk) 11:33, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

External links

If we're going to create external links in the body text for member companies which don't yet have their own articles on Wikipedia, we should do so for all, or for none. I've opted for the latter, as the resulting red links might spur article creation, and it avoids problems with conflicts of interest. -- Meticulo (talk) 02:19, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

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