Talk:Battle of Babylon Hill/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: (Just in case you'd forgotten about this.) Harrias ^talk 10:09, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK
Images properly licensed
"nominal" victory rather than "notional"
were carrying out reconnaissance passive voice "reconnoitering"
Link Somerset, musketeer, dragoon, artillery on first use
were able to pull back ~~from the hill~~ under the cover
town itself but were unable comma after "itself"
defence on Yeovil Bridge, over the River Yeo, a combination of infantry and artillery awkward
- I have rephrased to "Bedford had posted a guard, consisting of both infantry and artillery, on Yeovil Bridge, which spanned the River Yeo." Harrias ^talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Before the ~~entire~~ foot >Before all of the foot
amongst Moreton's men ~~too~~ "as well"
Which son of William Balfour?
- None of the sources say. Harrias ^talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
lost five, and the Royalists around 20 MOS says that spelling needs to be consistent for quantities of the same things, overriding the normal requirement about spelling numbers below ten
No need to link publisher locations--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:32, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- @Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for your review; I have edited the article to account for each of your points, and have addressed a couple directly above. Harrias ^talk 08:55, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]