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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Capitalize mountain: Cer Mountain
Done.
  • Stocks of munitions: had better munition stocks,
Fixed.
Check again.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
How about now ? 23 editor (talk) 01:53, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Only name year in dates on first mention or if its in another paragraph.
Done.
  • Not necessary to give nationality of each unit if it's clear who it belongs to.
Removed.
  • "the Cer" reads very oddly. Use either just Cer or Cer Mountain.
Done.
  • Second use of this phrase: across the Drina brought an end to the first Austro-Hungarian invasion of Serbia Reword one or the other.
The repeating sentence has been removed.
Done. 23 editor (talk) 01:55, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any book or source that you don't use in the article should either be deleted or moved to a "Further reading" section
All books and sources provided seem to be used as refs in the article.
  • Image licenses good
  • Couple of duplicate links that need to be removed
Done. 23 editor (talk) 00:07, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]