Talk:Begich Towers

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Opening sentence[edit]

"The Begich Towers Condominium is a building in Whittier, a very small town of Alaska. Its uniqueness lies in an eclectic mood of the structure that includes the private apartments that major urban services, to the point of focus around a couple of hundred people, or nearly the entire population of Whittier, which amounts to 217 inhabitants." -- This is a rambling sentence that is grammatically horrifying and it doesn't make sense. I would fix it but I don't even know what you are trying to say here. Can whoever wrote this clarify? Or can someone knowledgeable about the subject change this?

Actually this whole article needs a re-write...

Looks like it has been rewritten recently, just by someone who is perhaps not a native English speaker. RadioKAOS / Talk to me, Billy / Transmissions 01:54, 30 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just came across this myself. The writing is terrible. I'll see what I can do with it. Beeblebrox (talk) 23:44, 15 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed it up some so it least makes sense in English. I had to cut a few passages where I couldn't make sense of the phrasing. Beeblebrox (talk) 01:48, 16 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]