Talk:Betty (Adventure Time)/GA1
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Reviewer: Quenhitran (talk · contribs) 09:34, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
- I'll take up this one. Everything seems solid, so I presume that it won't take long.
General template, specific comments follow.
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
ALittleQuenhi (talk to me) 09:43, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
- Further comments
- Last sentence of lead section: the word "episode" was used repeatedly, which doesn't sound natural. Can you fix it?
- "Events" subheading: "both are voiced by Tom Kenny" => both were voiced/both voiced?
- "As such, he wants to create a portal to the past and apologize to his fiancée Betty for making her leave him; Hambo, filled with sentimentality, is the key to the portal." I'm not sure if the semicolon works in this case. Split it into two sentences may help, I guess, or use another linking.
- What does this mean: "Maurice LaMarche also reprises his recurring role as Grand Master Wizard; he also voices Belle Noche"? Perhaps this needs some other linking words.
- Reliable sources: you use a number of Tumblr, Twitter and Instagram posts as sources without "verfied" marks. For a GA to be passed it's not necessary, but you are encouraged to replace it with alternatives whenever possible.
That's it. I've done some minor fixes by myself. ALittleQuenhi (talk to me) 10:08, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
Great, GA now!