Talk:Bianca Ryan/GA1

GA Reassessment[edit]

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I will be doing the GA Reassessment on this article per the GA Sweeps project. H1nkles (talk) 18:11, 5 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Here are my concerns with the article:

Links 9 and 15 in the references section are dead. H1nkles (talk) 18:12, 5 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The lead is very undeveloped. Per WP:LEAD the lead is to be a summary of the entire article, touching on every point in a summary fashion. The lead does not do that.
The Biography section has several unreferenced assertions that would need in-line cites. I added a ^{[citation needed]} template to one sentence but this would apply to several sentences in this section.
In the television sub-section there is a list of shows that she has appeared on. Two problems: There are no dates for her appearance in the first three shows but there are for the rest, this is inconsistent, also there is no reference for this information, or for any information in this section. That is a bigger problem.
The Discography section also has no references.
All the information ends in 2007, is there anything more recent? What has she done since 2007?

Considering the myriad of problems with this article I will delist it from GA status. If someone wants to fix the problems and update the article please do so and list at WP:GAC for consideration for GA. H1nkles (talk) 19:44, 5 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to do some work here and there—when I get to it... xD—ATinySliver | talk 06:13, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]