Talk:Bill Szymczyk/GA1

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   The lead section should be expanded into two paragraphs.--Cannibaloki 20:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

   B. MoS compliance:

   I made some [minor] "adjustments".--Cannibaloki 20:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   What makes druglessdouglas.com and in2guitar.com reliable sources?--Cannibaloki 20:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   This article don't have images.--Cannibaloki 20:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

   Just checking...--Cannibaloki 04:00, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   On hold for a week.--Cannibaloki 20:28, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Made all fixes except the images. Expanded the lead to two paragraphs as requested. Removed bad refs (info in one was also in other refs as well, so it was superfluous. I removed the other one completely. As far as the images go, per WP:WIAGA, see footnote 6: "The presence of images is not, in itself, a requirement." There are no freely availible images of the subject yet in existance, as far as I could find after a good faith search. --Jayron32 01:19, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Great, passed.--Cannibaloki 04:00, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review this! --Jayron32 04:09, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

--Cannibaloki 04:29, 7 August 2009 (UTC)