Talk:Birmingham Americans/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Well-written

Lead section
- In the second sentence of the first paragraph, put (WFL) after World Football League.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- In last sentence of second paragraph, spell out "1".
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Franchise history section.
- In the third sentence and all sentences regarding "$", change to US$ and pipe in United States dollar for the first $.
- Done, except for two instances in exact quotations from source material. - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Create article for Larry Willingham and Larry Matson in last paragraph.
- Done: Larry Willingham and Larry Matson - Dravecky (talk) 20:28, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
1974 season section
- Where is the Mariona Military Institute located? Specify.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- In the final sentence, should "most valuable player" be capitalized in the first letter of each word.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
First half subsection
- List location of Rynearson Stadium listed in the second sentence of the second paragraph.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Second half subsection
- Put (now PGE Park) after Civic Stadium in the next-to-last sentence of the second paragraph.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- For the second sentence of the third paragraph, put (demolished in 1976) after Honolulu Stadium.
- Done - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Legacy section
- Create article for Terry Henley in third sentence of final paragraph.
- Done: Terry Henley - Dravecky (talk) 22:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Factually accurate and verifiable.

Sourcing issues missing for 14 and 98.
- Done: Los Angeles Times reference at #14 replaced with a Sarasota Journal reference available through Google News. URL for Dayton Daily News article replaced. - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Create article for newspapers in sources 21, 50 (italicize also), 75, and 77.
- Done: Sarasota Journal, The Dispatch (Lexington), Daily Record (Washington). Newspaper name at #50 italicized. - Dravecky (talk) 10:27, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Broad

Covers all aspects of the franchise's short history. No issues.

Neutral

No issues

Stable

No issues. Last edit done on 29 April 2010.

Images

All images valid. No issues.

Overall

Hold. Good article. Some minor adjustments and the creation of some redlinked article and it will be a GA.
- Thank you! - Dravecky (talk) 17:36, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done! I have completed all of the fixes, changes, and article creations you outlined here. - Dravecky (talk) 10:27, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - Passed GA. Good job. Chris (talk) 13:32, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Chris (talk) 15:11, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]