Talk:Blood (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Starstriker7 (talk · contribs) 00:21, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

I'll do this review. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 00:21, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Criterion 1

• "physiologically signs of phobia" - Does this describe the high levels of adrenaline, or did you mean to say that Scully finds "physiological signs of phobia" as a separate point?

I completed a copyedit of the article. Let me know if you disagree with any of my changes.

Criterion 2

• The A.V. Club reference (Ref 11) does cite that the episode is "good", but it should be added that this comparison was with regards to two other episodes, of which one ranked higher (Little Green Men). Add something in about this to cover the context.
• Additionally from the A.V. Club reference, he does describe it as humorous, but not in the traditional sense. This should also be clarified.

Overall comments

Criteria 3 (based on precedent), 4, 5, 6 passed. My only Criterion 1 concern is listed above. Examining 2 right now. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 00:48, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Criterion 2 evaluated. I've completed the review, and am putting the article on hold. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 01:09, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I believe I've addressed your concerns. I tried to re-word your issues with Criterion 1, and I added some references points for the second issue. Also, thank you for the copyedit.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:53, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Excellent. It looks like you are all set. I'm passing the article now. --Starstriker7^(Talk) 06:21, 11 May 2012 (UTC)