the Sharif - I know you linked this, but please give a description of who the Sharif are. Suggestion: "in Salé, the city's nobility, called (or 'known as') the Sharif,"
Done
Meanwhile, in France, anger against Morocco was increasing. A series of incidents in October 1849 damaged relations between both countries. anger among who? the French elite? the Frenchmen? the government? What were the series of incidents that caused the damage to the relation ship and/or the vexation of the people.
Done
caused by drought - caused by a drought or caused by a series of droughts?
Done
In Salé, many people were starving, and the agricultural crisis and anger towards France ultimately led to the bombardment of Salé. Okay, this isn't connecting for me. If there was a drought/a couple droughts, what did France do that they were angry against them? The reasons for the anger, from both France and Morocco, isn't clearly explained.
I've clarified the reasons for anger. I've been unsure about how I could explain the agricultural crisis was relevant - it was relevant because the people of Salé were starving, and stole the goods in order to survive.
where they picked up Julius Doazan who is Julius Doazan and what's his role in the bombardment?
Done, he was simply the consul - France's representative in Morocco
The French crews - crews of what ship(s)?
Done
Gomer prepared for battle - prepared how? please clarify.
Done
forty battery artillery weapons - nonsensical. Perhaps, forty batteries of artillery weapons" is what you meant?
Done, indeed.
and the artillery in Rabat were rendered useless. how were they rendered useless?
Done
The battle gained intensity when did it gain intensity and how? Did French fire intensify? Did Moroccan fire intensify?
Done
the batteries were removed from the city who removed the batteries? Why were the batteries moved in the middle of a firefight?
Done
resistance did not stop until 5:00 p.m. when you say resistance didn't stop until 5, do you mean the Moroccans didn't stop firing until 5:00 or something else?
That the Moroccans didn't stop firing until 5:00 p.m.
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