Talk:Born Again (Third Day song)/GA1
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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)
Lead/Infobox/Background[edit]
- No cover?
- Recorded in various locations Which ones?
- 52nd Grammy Awards - the Grammy Award for Best Gospel Song and... I don't think the hyphen is needed. Just use a colon.
- No need to link Third Day again.
Composition[edit]
- Join the two paragraphs. They're pretty short anyway.
- No need to link Lacey Mosley, ballad, folk music, alternative metal, and pop music again.
- Don't capitalize "born" in "born again".
- folk-flavored ballad... which Add a space before the ellipsis.
- Citation 3 should be after "Flyleaf", not "and".
- End the sentence after which beautifully features Lacey Mosley from Flyleaf.
- Don't link Flyleaf again.
Reception[edit]
- chart week of June 13, 2009. Date-Month-Year is used for the references, so it should be used here.
- Don't capitalize "No."
- Don't link the chart names again.
Live performances/Other uses/References[edit]
- All dates should be in DMY.
- At WinterJam#Winter Jam 2010, Pipe the link!
- Put the "other uses" sentence in another section, maybe the lead.
- Reference 12 should be in DMY.
- Citations that have a chart search should have a note.
Once these concerns have been addressed, I will pass the article. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:43, 18 March 2012 (UTC)