Talk:Bruno Manser

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"Anonymous information concerning the presumed killing or the whereabouts of Bruno Manser still can be sent to bm.searchandrescue@ecoterra.net"

--S(l)ick nation (talk) 15:05, 5 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bruno Manser/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:50, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This article needs some reshaping, some issues are listed below:

Written like an essay. Not done
Too many cleanup tags. Not done
Paragraphs are too short. Not done
Lead is too short. Not done
Some facts lack citations. Not done
Numbers less then nine are represented with words. Done
"Possible explanations" section sounds unusual and is unecessary Done

I'd normally quickfail this, but I'm giving you seven days to fix these issues, as part of "assuming good faith"--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 22:01, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking time to review this article. I have done some changes as per the recommendations. However, the article cannot be further expanded because the book "Bruno Manser:The Inside Story" is not available. I would accept a quickfail for this because the paragraphs are too short. However, would you point out the exact sentences that requires further citations? Thanks. I will nominate the article for peer review first before I nominate it again for GA review in the future.Cerevisae (talk) 23:35, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

- Failed, and noted with "citation needed" tags.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:48, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Issues with criteria below:

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:21, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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