Talk:Build.com
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I've gone through the article many times and here are a few changes I'll make in the hopes of keeping this article from being deleted:
- Change, "Since its inception in September 2000, Build.com has experienced annual growth selling plumbing, lighting, door hardware, ventilation, tools and more" to "Build.com is an online retailer of plumbing, lighting, door hardware, ventilation, tools and more."
- Change "As the company grew to include other network stores, it also changed its name to Improvement Direct in 2005. Finally, in 2010, the company launched Build.com as its new brand name" to "The company changed its name to Improvement Direct in 2005, and in 2010, the company launched Build.com as its new brand name."
- Omit "The niche stores offer a different buying experience for each category."
- I'll also go through and tighten it up even more.
Would it be acceptable to keep the list of the Network of Stores (i.e., Build.com, FaucetDirect.com, LightingDirect.com, etc.)?
Thank you for your help in this. Obviously, I want to abide by the article guidelines, so I'd love to hear any feedback.
Seanmurphy27 (talk) 16:36, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
Sean