Talk:Business routes of Interstate 69 in Michigan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 00:24, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • The phrase "a two-lane highway with limited access on the east of the city" needs to be reworded. I assume you can change the first part to two-lane limited-access highway.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • How many lanes wide are the portions of the Lansing business route?
   • The sentence "It is the longest business route in the state of Michigan at a length of over 14 1⁄2 miles (23.3 km)." better belongs in the first couple of sentences of the Lansing business route section rather than in the middle of the history.
   • Is it really necessary to mention the terminus of the divided highway section in the major intersections table of the Lansing business route?
   • The description of the Port Huron business route doesn't mention M-25 although it is mentioned in the major intersections table.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Pictures of the business loops would be nice to have. Also, It may help to have a map in the infobox showing where all the business routes of I-69 in Michigan are. However, the lack of neither will hold this article up.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will place the article on hold for a few issues to be addressed. Dough4872 00:46, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

@Dough4872: tweaks applied. I think the divided-highway section should be left in the table. U.S. Route 131 notes where it has a divided highway segment, and MDOT notes it in the PRFA. Imzadi 1979 → 02:31, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Dough4872 02:40, 5 June 2015 (UTC)