Talk:BuzzSaw (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 13:57, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Pass! Good work!--Dom497 (talk) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not really a major issue but are there any pictures of the actual ride that can be used in the article?--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

None that are freely available. Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The ride no longer the second tallest inversion....now its the third. You might need to change the refs with change as well.--Dom497 (talk) 14:20, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Shouldn't the marketing section be sub-section of the history section?--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Don't use "BuzzSaw" at the beginning of each paragraph in the characteristic section!--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"BuzzSaw's steel roller coaster track is 150 metres (490 ft) in length." - Maybe incorperate this sentance with the firs paragraph in the same section? It doesn't look right when its all alone :( .--Dom497 (talk) 14:16, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Be more specific on the roller coaster model. SkyLoop has 5 "sub-models".--Dom497 (talk) 14:18, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Themeparkgc Talk 07:35, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All good!--Dom497 (talk) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]