Talk:Capture of Grenada (1779)/GA1
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll start this review shortly. Interesting topic! MathewTownsend (talk) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Review
- Lede
- "French forces were reembarked on the fleet" - I guess these is military terminology but I'm not sure what it means
- "Embarkation" is a fairly well-defined concept independent of military uses... Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "French forces were reembarked on the fleet" - I guess these is military terminology but I'm not sure what it means
- Background
- French capture
- Aftermath
- What is the significant of John Paul Jones attending the performance?
- "In order to better defend against a similar attack to the one they launched" - I don't quite understand this sentence - maybe it's me. Rephrased Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "The divisions in Grenadian society" - social divisions? military divisions? Clarified Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- Caption
- Everything else looks fine. A very clear, concise article.
- I made a few copy edits that you are free to reverse.[1]
MathewTownsend (talk) 21:04, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time to review; I think I've addressed your concerns. Let me know if not... Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
- Your careful writing and presentation is much appreciated!
MathewTownsend (talk) 17:03, 21 December 2011 (UTC)