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Thank you, NarangD. I'll admit it got late and I saved the page a tad prematurely. I will clean up issues today.
Oughtta Be Otters (talk) 15:27, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I would be grateful for anyone who has thoughts on improving the article re: citations and/or making it less resume-like. I used 20+ citations from IEEE, NY Times, NPR, New Zealand newspapers and the like. Basically at least one citation per sentence. As for tone, I am perhaps not removed enough from it to see the resume-like writing; a friend who is an electrical engineer was talking about how much he admires her, I read up a bit and found her contributions to robotics notable and also the understanding (not directly mentioned, avoiding original research) that she undertook her career path as a woman - as far back as the 1980s - is pretty exceptional. As is the rank she has reached in the field as a woman. Anyway - open to improvements, or to someone removing the template once the work is deemed sufficient. Thanks Oughtta Be Otters (talk) 00:20, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I removed the template because the sources are strong and the article appears to be quite similar in format to those of other people with similar qualifications. Pymie1938 (talk) 01:20, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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