Talk:Cerro Blanco (volcano)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Would like to help with this as well when we are at it. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, @Sainsf:. Take note that I didn't pass this article through GOCE so verbiage will probably need some scrutiny here.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 18:55, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, so here are my comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Known as "Robledo" in which language?
it is a caldera located Omit "a caldera", it is redundant.
in a depression Calderas are depressions, so this should be redundant. Also, an explanation of caldera in a few words would be really helpful.
less well defined caldera to the south and with several lava domes. "well-defined", remove "with"
Every para should not start with the volcano name, variety is appreciated. Try something like "The caldera" at times.
up to one metre and are separated by distances up to thirty metres convert templates
Unlike dunes they do not Comma before "they"
have been compared to Martian ripple marks By whom?

Regional setting

where since the Eocene volcanic activity occurs –> where volcanic activity dates to the Eocene
north of 25°; south of 25° "southern latitude"
a rising of the arc "a rise in the arc"
What are pyroclastic and subduction geometry?

Local setting

Several duplicate links from now on, use this tool to fix them User: Ucucha/duplinks
Nevado Tres Cruces lies in the west and Nevado Ojos del Salado lies southwest to the west, to the southwest.

In Pre-Holocene is it rosa white or white rosa?

@Sainsf: Got most of these things; for the Martian ripple marks, would it be OK to mention" geologists" since the papers are written by them? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:37, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:49, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: Got these other things as well.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:39, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, glad to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]