Talk:Charlie Don't Surf (Veronica Mars)

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Date	Process	Result
August 16, 2015	Good article nominee	Listed
June 28, 2016	Good topic candidate	Promoted

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 29, 2015.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that when asked, Veronica Mars actor Enrico Colantoni immediately suggested former Just Shoot Me! co-star and friend Laura San Giacomo for the role of his love interest in "Charlie Don't Surf"?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Charlie Don't Surf (Veronica Mars)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review should be up soon. Good888 (talk) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

Laura San Giacomo and Enrico Colantoni were linked twice.

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"since their show Just Shoot Me!." I am not too sure that . is needed.

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Synopsis

Optional, but try to add citations if possible. I know from the Manual of Style that it is not required but it helps!

Citations to what?

Perhaps ref 11?

I added one at the end of the section. Let me know if you want more. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Should rape be linked?

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Since this is Parker’s first mention, it should state her full name.

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"A woman asks Keith to investigate her husband, who may be having an affair." Should have meanwhile at the start of the sentence.

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Can fraternity party be linked?

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"and presents an evidence." An evidence?

oops.

"Keith and Harmony flirt." Erm expand on this?

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Arc significance

I am not too sure this section is needed. It already states this in the Synopsis.

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Production

Matt Czuchry was already linked earlier.

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Reception

Compare the ratings to Wichita Linebacker.

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"Television Without Pity gave "Charlie Don't Surf" a "B+"." Can you expand this a bit?

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"Reviewer Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode" I think the readers would already know Sepinwall is a reviewer considing this is the reviews section. Perhaps you could say: Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode on his blog What's Alan Watching.

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References

Used Checklinks and found no problems. Yup it does say one is broken, but that was archived.
Ref 1 needs its publisher.

As far as I can see, all the refs have publishers. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Placing on hold for now. Good888 (talk) 11:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I believe I have responded to all your concerns. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No problem. There WAS a reference that did not have its publisher, but I have added it now. Promoting to GA class. Good888 (talk) 19:54, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]