Talk:Chris Wroblewski/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:00, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments[edit]

  • He got no college scholarship offers in high school. "got" -> "received"
  • How do you know he was born in 1989/1990?
  • As a sophomore for a seniorless 2005–06 Highland Park team, he posted 28 points in a 60–58 overtime victory over Mount Carmel High School., is the 28 points something notable or was the game notable? Is this just a random high school game where he scored 28 points? Also, "seniorless" is not a word.
  • Wroblewski led the Ivy League in three-point field goal percentage during the Ivy League schedule So, he led three point percentage just during Ivy League Games? Not for the whole season. This seems like a random stat.
    • In American college basketball (and other American college sports), it is common to see league game only stats because it levels the playing field for schools that may play schedules with wide-ranging strengths of schedules. It is somewhat less notable than an overall statistic, but a perfectly valid one to point out that he had some points of excellence.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:13, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • helped keep number-one ranked Kansas on the ropes at on the ropes is too colloquial. Reword to be more encyclopedic.
  • Wroblewski, who started 33 of the 34 games is one of six players, need a comma after "games"
  • He led the team in 3pt% "3pt%" needs to be written out like it was in a previous paragraph
  • Wroblewski was named tri-captain I am pretty into sports and can definitely infer what this means, but are you saying he was named as one of three captains? If so, just state that plainly.
  • and with 21 points, became his first career double-double missing "it" or "the game". Like what exactly became his first career double-double?
  • In his 104th career game, Wroblewski established a Cornell record for the slowest achievement of 1000 career points scored. - no comment here, just made me laugh

Pausing for now, will look at references in a bit. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

Looks good. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:19, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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