Talk:Christianity in Nepal/GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk · contribs) 13:10, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this soon.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk (We are the champions, my friends) 13:10, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

There are too many images.
The first image in the lead could be replaced with a better picture.
Image caption names i.e. Ganga Prasad Pradhan should be wikilinked.
Prayer at a Nepali church. -> Prayers
Christianity is, according to the 2011 census, the fifth most practiced religion in Nepal -> Christianity is the fifth most practiced religion in Nepal according to the 2011 census?
but proselytization and conversion were still legally prohibited. This needs clarification.
Fix dashes per WP:MOS. See MOS:DASH. You can use User talk:GregU/dashes.js to assist you.
They worked in each of the valley's three city-states. Which three city-states?
the king of Bhaktapur, Ranajit Malla, who, one wrote. Is that meant to say who, once?
It currently has a staff of around 300. Source says 400.
Nepali Catholics have played leading roles in interreligious dialogue in recent decades. interreligious dialogue should be wikilinked.
those who actually converted (that is, were baptized). -> converted (that is if they were baptized)?
there would be imprisonment of one year -> imprisonment for a year?
the Jhapa District -> Jhapa District.

I will have to fail this GA nomination because it contains copyright violations. According to Earwig's Copyvio Detector, it contains 96.3% with confidence.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 15:20, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]