Talk:City of Lover/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review in the next couple days. My first dabble within the GAN review space (so apologies if it will be a bit slow). Ping me if I don't get to it a week from now. Hope all is well. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:56, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for taking up this review, Pseud 14. Please ping me once you finish reviewing and I'd try to resolve within 1 week, though there might be some delay due to my hectic schedule lately. Best, Ippantekina (talk) 15:27, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Concert type should be one-off concert instead of one-day. Both in the lead and infoxbox to be consistent with other one-off concert articles.
• The avoid confusion, number of shows should just be listed as 1 — Europe can be removed since location info already precedes that.
• Remove 1 played, as this likely refers to the aired television special for the same concert.
• I think we can also remove duration for the TV special, as it is covered in the body, and since this is the article for the concert.
• The first para is only two sentences long; maybe merge it with the 2nd para. While not an absolute rule, general guidelines per MOS:LEADLENGTH is 2 para for articles with fewer than 15K characters.
• with tens of thousands of seats is a bit informal. Perhaps rephrase?

Background

• free-spirited production Swift's songwriting → free-spirited production and Swift's songwriting...
• Swift held the City of Lover concert, a one-off concert at the → Swift held City of Lover, a one-off concert... -- suggest taking out the first instance of concert, as City of Lover itself refers to the concert.
• were no widespread promotional campaigns → extensive promotional campaigns is much better IMO
• The City of Lover concert was the only concert → City of Lover was the only concert -- drop first instance of concert per above.
• The City of Lover concert marked Swift's first concert -- same as above
• She had also held a small performance → She previously held a small performance

Television and music releases

• ran for a length of 42 minutes → ran for 42 minutes

Reception

• Upon completion, the City of Lover concert received positive feedback → Upon completion, City of Lover received positive feedback
• to play the 2,000-seat Olympia → to play at the 2,000-seat Olympia
• Swift had had limited commercial success -- removed duplicated had
• she had prioritized the English-speaking → she prioritized the English-speaking
• behind-the-scene → behind-the-scenes conception -- suggest linking
• Swift only included the Lover songs was the result of the ongoing masters controversy → Swift only included the Lover songs as a result of the ongoing masters controversy

Set list

• Good

References

• Copyvio score at 35.5% but seems to be for use one of quote, which is acceptable.

Media

• File:City of Lover (ABC Special) by Taylor Swift.png - with Non-free FUR - OK
• File:The lobby of L'Olympia in Paris.jpg - Creative Commons license - OK

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold @Ippantekina: I have finished my review and have put this on hold until after you address my comments; nice work on this! -- Pseud 14 (talk) 22:18, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

  @Pseud 14: thanks again for taking up the review. I have addressed everything, and also trimmed down the quote to lower the copyvio score. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 16:04, 27 February 2023 (UTC)

  Thank you for your work. Passing. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:33, 27 February 2023 (UTC)