Talk:Claude Piel

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Review comments[edit]

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Appropriate infobox should be added
Photograph should be added from a source with a free license, if available
Needs some copy editing into Wikipedia style and internal links adding
Some basic biographical information required, including precise dates of birth/death, place of birth, positions held with dates, etc
Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
Main body of article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
Information on work should be expanded
References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
External links may need pruning, as discussion forums are not usually suitable

Espresso Addict 02:17, 24 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]