Talk:Club Penguin Rewritten/GA1

GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. Zekerocks11 (talk) 23:05, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Zekerocks11 (talk · contribs) 23:05, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

While having a glimpse over the article, I unfortunately will have to fail it immediately for quite a few reasons. Please view the list below for a more detailed reason why the article failed.

Info Box MOS errors: Overall, a lack of information on who the developers were, no exact release date, no designers or programmers available, ect.
Some citations aren't reliable.
Gameplay section doesn't talk about gameplay almost at all
Lack of details on how the game functioned or played, and not even a link to the original game for people to view how the game played there. You mentioned the game being based upon older version of club penguin, so why don't you talk about what it was about?
Just an overall lack of details and content overall. I would check the Video Game MOS for more details on what an article should look like.

If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.

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