Talk:Community of Royalist People's Party/GA1
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Reviewer: Midnightblueowl (talk · contribs) 16:41, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
I'll take this one on. Looks like there's been a lot of good work here thus far. Midnightblueowl (talk) 16:41, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
It's great to see that web sources have been archived (far few editors actually bother to do this), but why are a number of the sources omitted from this process? Although not a requirement for GA status, it would be ideal to see all of the web sources properly archived. Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:14, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
Can we get citations to bolster the infobox claims that the party was centre-right, nationalistic, and Sihanoukist? Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:29, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
I think that it would be worth providing an additional sentence giving a little background to Ranariddh's split from FUNCINPEC in that opening sentence in the "History" section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 18:54, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
Logo section
- "party logo has". Should this not be "had"? Midnightblueowl (talk)
- "Brahman tradition". Can this be clarified. Would it be better to say "Hindu belief"? Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:06, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
- You are right about the source, but I believe that what is meant is not in fact Brahman, but Brahmin. Thus I would recommend changing this to "Brahmin tradition". Would that be okay with you, Mr Tan? Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:47, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
- I've made the change myself. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:49, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- "three circles in the yellow, white and green colours, which represents the monarchy, peace and water respectively". This wording could be improved. "Around the logo were three circles; one was yellow, representing the monarchy, another was white, representing peace, and the third was green, representing water"? Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:06, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
- "When Ranariddh returned to FUNCINPEC in January 2015, the party adopted a new party logo that has a similar design inspired from CRPP's party logo" Again, the prose could be improved here. "On Ranariddh's return to the party in January 2015, FUNCINPEC adopted a new logo that was inspired by that of the defunct CRPP" would read more smoothly, for instance. Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:06, 7 March 2016 (UTC)
I'm happy to pass this now. Congratulations, Mr Tan! Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:49, 15 March 2016 (UTC)