Talk:Comoros at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 13:57, 3 November 2014 (UTC)

Might as well take a look at this "at the 2008 Summer Olympics" article as well.

Background

• "No Comoran athlete has ever one a medal at an Olympic Games."- change one to won.

Athletics

• "Comoros's youngest competitor, At age 18, Youssouf was the country's oldest competitor, and was competing at his first Olympics." Remove Comoros's youngest competitor, change country's oldest to youngest and add a source at the end.
• "0.55 second behind the winner, Ivet Lalova." - Second to seconds.
• "Ahamada was 0.75 seconds behind the fastest athlete and 0.23 seconds behind the slowest athlete who progressed to the semi-finals, Thi Huong Vu."- Mention that Oludamola Osayomi was the fastest.

Swimming

• Mention that Attoumane was the oldest of the three Comoran athletes.
• "He finished eighth out of eight in his heat"- Change to last out of eight.
• "He was 8.17 seconds behind the fastest athlete, Amaury Leveaux. Attoumane was 7.46 seconds behind the slowest athlete that progressed to the semi-finals (Gideon Louw)" - Change to "He was 8.17 seconds behind the fastest athlete, Amaury Leveaux and was 7.46 seconds behind the slowest athlete that progressed to the semi-finals, Gideon Louw"

That's all the issues I could find. Once these are sorted, I will promote this to GA class. good888 (talk) 13:57, 3 November 2014 (UTC)

@Good888: Thanks for all these reviews. I have  Done all your suggested changes - NG39 (Used to be NickGibson3900)^Talk 04:36, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

@NG39: As promised, I am going to promote this to GA class. Nice job. good888 (talk) 09:10, 4 November 2014 (UTC)