Talk:DJ Hero 2/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article tomorrow. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:42, 4 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

Crossfade is a disambiguation page, fix where that should link
"and for a wide -genre soundtrack" i'm pretty sure the space isn't supposed to be there.
"DJ Hero 2' " random ' can be removed
"Several new competitive modes vie two DJ players against each other" doesn't sound quite right as worded; the players would vie rather than the modes.
"David Guetta has stated that he is set to work on the game's sequel to arrive late in 2010." perhaps it should be noted who david guetta is since there's no wikilink (link him if there's an article)
"While DJ Hero 2 will not use Kinect or PlayStation Move motion-sensing technology, Jackson has not ruled them out for a future iteration of the game." needs to be past tense, but I'm not sure if this should remain given the cancellation of the hero series.
"Usher will be contributing his song "OMG" featuring will.i.am for DJ Hero 2," tense
"DJ Hero 2 will be sold with various promotional items. Within Europe and select stores in North America, players purchasing the game in one of two bundle packages (either with one or two turntable controllers) will receive the predecessor DJ Hero free.[20] Other North American stores offer carrying cases for the turntables, MP3 versions of selected mixes, or redemption codes for in-game customization options." tense issues throughout para
"DJ Hero 2's setlist will include 83 mashups from nearly 100 songs from about 85 different artists" tense
"In addition, through an additional free add-on to be released in November 2010," tense (i presume it was released then as noted)
Punctuation should usually rest inside quotes; a few spots in the repetition section have this issue.
Some of the reference links seem to redirect elsewhere, see here. You don't have to fix them for this review, but it might be prudent in case the redirects are scrapped.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:54, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've gone through and and fixed these. It should be careful that the series is not "cancelled". They shuttered their division that made these, but FreeStyleGAmes still exist and there's an option that they may come back in a year or so, future vision ideas aren't invalid. On the punctuation, most of these are partial statements from the reviewers so under the logical quote system we use, the period is part of "our" writing, not theirs, and thus is outside the quotes. I did run down and fix the redirected links too. --MASEM (t)

Noted; I keep making that confusion on the series myself. Anyway, everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:27, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]