Talk:David Fletcher (baseball)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Hello Sewageboy! I'll complete a review within a week. -Riley1012 (talk) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
- "Fletcher was born in Orange, California and attended..." comma is needed after a state's name when the sentence continues
- "...and was awarded as the WCC Defensive Player of the Year." This wording is awkward. Change to "was named the WCC Defensive Player of the Year"
- "Fletcher began the 2023 season with the Angels, but went just..." comma needs to be taken out after Angels
2. Well-sourced
- Ref 23 needs more information in its citation (including the website name and access date)
- Ref 47 is a bare URL
- Refs 6, 11, 24, 34, 36, and 39 all need access dates
Copyvio check good. Spot check of refs 2, 9, 21, 27, 35, 50, and 55 looks good.
Other
- "Fletcher has received endorsement deals from Budweiser, Bank of America, and New Balance." This should either be expanded and made into a new section (public image or something like that) or moved into the player profile section. Endorsement deals aren't a part of someone's personal life.
Article is neutral, stable, and all images are free and relevant.
Only a few changes needed to be made, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 13:59, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
- Hi @Riley1012, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if any issues remain. Sewageboy (talk) 05:24, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.