Talk:Digging the Grave/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"absence of keyboard player Roddy Bottum" why absent?
"charted" could link to record chart.
"who had been fired " why?
"producer Andy Wallace. Wallace" quick repetitive.
"changes, Roddy Bottum" no need for that first name.
" of Bottom's" typo?!
" March of 1995" no need for "of".
"the United Kingdom" you've already used UK, so don't go back to this.
Quote box needs attribution.

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:25, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I hope these changes should address what you've listed above (let me know if I've missed something); as always, thanks for taking the time to look this over. Gʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ^ˣ 19:25, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]