Talk:Do Ya Thang (Rihanna song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Till I Go Home (talk · contribs) 04:11, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
I will review the article :) Till I Go Home (talk) 04:11, 4 April 2012 (UTC)
Disambiguation links
- Orange County.
Infobox
- No issues.
Lead
- for the deluxe edition of her sixth studio album Talk That Talk -> taken from the deluxe edition of her sixth studio album, Talk That Talk.
- prominent influences from the '80s -> what influences? Needs to be specified. Also 1980s not 80s.
- The song uses "catchy" drum breaks, synths and "funky" and "subtle" hook. I'm confused, is the hook funky and subtle or just subtle?
- Lyrically, it's a complimentary love track -> "it's" is colloquial, change to "it is".
Background and composition
- Nash also co-wrote two more songs on the album: its fourth single "Birthday Cake" and "Red Lipstick which is also featured on the deluxe edition of Talk That Talk (2011). Red Lipstick needs closing quotation mark. Make clear which one is featured on the deluxe version - Birthday Cake or Red Lipstick?
- The song was mixed by Manny Marroquin. Erik Madrid and Chris Galland served as mixing assistants. This can be made into one sentence.
- "Do Ya Thang" is a R&B song with prominent influences from the '80s that runs for 3 minutes and 44 seconds. Again, same with lead for the 1980s. "Runs for" is colloquial -> change to "has a length of".
- ...noted that the song sounds as the albums second single -> "albums" should be "album's", because it's a possessive term.
- love song which contains -> change "which" to "that"
- Exton further continued that the song is full with vague descriptions of Rihanna's feelings -> this can be worded better.
Critical reception
- According to Maz Hallima from Flavour Magazine "Do Ya Thang" has a very "teenager-ish vibe" -> Change "from Flavour Magazine" to "of Flavour Magazine". Also, needs a comma between "Magazine" and "Do".
- He furhter noted that -> furhter isn't a word
- "very sexual persona" sounds POV'ish.
- A reviewer of Sputnikmusic -> a reviewer from Sputnikmusic
- Michael Jepson of The Fourth State concluded that "Do Ya Thang" together with "Cockiness (Love It)" and "Roc Me Out" -> comma between "Thang" and "together" and after "Roc Me Out"
- According to Jepson, all of them are "blatantly raunchy" and feel like a follow up to Rihanna's 2011 single "S&M" (Loud, 2011) -> how does this pertain to the song in question?
- According to her the track is... -> comma between "her" and "the"
Track listing
- No issues.
Credits and personnel
- No issue.
Charts
- in the chart issue -> I think you mean for the chart issue?
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Passing the article :) — Till I Go Home (talk) 03:46, 5 April 2012 (UTC)