Talk:Donald Forrester Brown/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No Dead links
Prose Suggestions[edit]
- Brown's Victoria Cross was the second won by a soldier serving with the suggest you change this to Brown's Victoria Cross was the second awarded to a soldier serving with the
- , having been promoted to corporal. suggest , by this time promoted to corporal.
- However, with Brown's death it was not until the officers of his battalion started agitating suggest However, with Brown's death it was not until the officers of his battalion started lobbying, unless the protest/effort was highly public.
- @Zawed: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:24, 8 March 2018 (UTC)