Talk:Earl MacDonald/GA1
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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 June 2015 (UTC)
This article does not pass Wikipedia:Good article criteria in any way and fails WP:GACR points 1, 2, 3 as well as 6.
Listing some of the glaring misfits.
- The lead does not conform wP:LEAD
- Ample usage of blogspots.com sources
- Unsourced content even in the first para
- No concrete structure for the biography and resorting to bullet lists
...and the list goes on and on.
This article needs extensive rewrite, extensive polishing and a WP:PR at the minimum, plus its nominator Pgruhn has not worked on anything since April 15, and has not attempted to proof read it. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 09:55, 9 June 2015 (UTC)