Talk:Edward McCarthy (police officer)

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Quotation[edit]

As it stands, the quotation taken from the website doesn't seem to sit well in Wikipedia. While there might not be a problem with the copy-paste, it seems as if the article is entirly centered around that quote.

Also, the citation isn't "clean" - there's some typos that managed to work their way in, and there's possibly some style issues. --Sigma 7 11:55, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]