Talk:Ephesto/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:52, 31 May 2017 (UTC)

Initial Comments:

• Do "Pantera del Ring" and "Safari" have to be boldfaced?

• Per MOS:BOLD I believe so since they are alterntive names of the article subject, his former ring names.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• "of fire, Hefesto," --> did you mean "of fire. Hefesto,"?

• Clarified.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• "rival promotion" --> I'm likely wrong, but for some reason "promotion" doesn't sound like it is the correct word here

• I replaced it with "company" although a wrestling company is also known as a "wrestling promotion" or just "promotion", but I can see how it would get confusing so I went with the clearer term.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• From my knowledge, there are generally commas after statements like "In 2000" or "By 1997"; in these two examples you don't use them, but in "In late 2003," and "In late 2005," you did – just a note to think about

• Fixed to be more consistent, thank you.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• In "Ephesto (2007–present)", the first paragraph does not end with a citation "Bucanero's injury was so severe that it required surgery and he was out of action for six months." and I believe all of them should

• I removed that sentence since its more about Rey Bucanero than Ephesto.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• "cage, keeping" --> I think you can remove the comma as it is not two independent clauses

• Fixed.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• In the "Notes" column, could you just use "rowspan" so you don't have to repeat "[4]" over and over again?

• That is an excellent suggestion, done.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• Reference #17 – did you mean "Spanish" and not "German"?

• all I can say is "D'oh". fixed  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• Just a question: in Reference #24, should any of the title be capitalized? Such as "The Bizarre & Honorable world of Wild Mexican Wrestling"?

• Absolutely right, good catch.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

ON HOLD: This was a nice read as I am not too aware of wrestling. Nothing major sticks out to me, but I would like to see this points addressed before further action. Thanks. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 22:20, 4 June 2017 (UTC).

• Carbrera I believe I have addressed your concerns, I appreciate all the input to help improve the article.  MPJ-DK  22:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

• MPJ-DK – Thank you for addressing all of my concerns so quickly. I will pass this. Good luck to you in the WikiCup! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 00:54, 5 June 2017 (UTC).