Talk:Fifth Down Game (1990)/GA1

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GA Reassessment[edit]

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I'm reassessing this article for WP:GA Sweeps. After reading it, there's a lot of work that needs to be done on this article. Most of my comments are the same as Pete's in a section above, but I have others as well:

  • The WP:LEAD needs expansion.
  • The Background section is both unrefrerenced and needlessly detailed. Since it was a typical college game during the season, not much needs to be here, and only rules that apply need to stand.
  • The game summary needs expansion. See other college game GAs for good examples, and of course the fifth down part needs to be split off and beefed up a bit. (in fact the background could go in the new fifth down section itself)
  • A good deal of the National championship section is unsourced, with quite a bit of information that, again, has nothing to do with the 1990 season, let alone this game.
  • Ref #9 (why can't they win?) is a deadlink.
  • Nothing mentioned about the ref squad after the original suspension.

I'll put this on hold for five days. If a good deal of progress is not made by then, it fails. If all this is done, I'll do a more detailed review. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:24, 5 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

After mulling it over, I'm actually going to delist it now, because there is a huge amount of work that needs to be done on this article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:57, 7 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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