Talk:Franz Burgmeier

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Good articleFranz Burgmeier has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
December 1, 2008Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 9, 2008.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Franz Burgmeier became the first Liechtensteiner to play football in England after being signed on the advice of a club chairman's twelve-year-old grandson?

GA Review[edit]

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Hi. This is my first GAR, so bear with me on this one. I'll post some comments as soon as I've gone through the article. Apterygial talkstalkinsane idea 10:20, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Looks pretty good, some minor things though:

  • "He spent only one season with Aarau before a move to the previous season's runner-ups FC Basel in 2006." I always thought the the plural of "runner-up" was "runners-up" ("runner" being the noun).
  • "His two seasons with Basel were broken up by a loan spell with FC Thun, before he moved to English League Two-side Darlington in August 2008." You've already introduced Darlington in the first sentence, so you could probably just say "His two seasons with Basel were broken up by a loan spell with FC Thun, before he moved to Darlington in August 2008."
    • I've changed it. I think I put it in for future but you're right, it's overuse at the moment. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is their something you can link "loan" to in order to explain it?
  • "Burgmeier was born in Triesen, Liechtenstein, a small town, with a population of 4,500, close to the border with Switzerland." Doesn't need the comma after "a small town".
  • "Burgmeier has a girlfriend, Monica, who lives in Switzerland. She also plays football, as a full back, in National League B." I guess I have a problem with this being in a section called "Early life". A related problem here could be a lack of an "Outside football" section. The page as it stands is really about his career. It is probably not at this stage hugely important, but is there anything you can add outside of that area?
    • My last GAN, it was thought best to keep all the personal life together rather than have a separate one-line section. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • And you don't know Monica's last name?
    • There's only one source and it doesn't name her I'm afraid. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • Hmmm. I think that if you name her at all it just highlights the fact that you don't know her last name. Her name probably isn't needed at all. Apterygial talkstalkinsane idea 23:53, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
        • I understand what you mean. But I think it's best left in since it is more likely to be improved if the details are there, rather than improved it it's not there. Peanut4 (talk) 00:03, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the Fall Season". Shouldn't it be "Autumn" on this page?
    • It's officially called the Fall Season. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "FC Aarau" begins with a linking word. I would probably avoid that.
  • Little indication is given about why he changed clubs. Was it personal or professional reasons (two or three times in the article)?
    • It mentions the reason for leaving Vaduz and Basel. Not sure about why he left Aarau. I guess it was because they were a better side but I'll try find a source on it. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Liechtenstein won another two games in their following qualifying campaign—for the 2008 European Championships." The dash probably isn't necessary.
  • References seem fine, RSSSF is probably OK on close inspection despite my initial reservations.
  • No chance of a picture?
    • There's nothing on flickr. And don't know of any others. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Should you be referencing the infobox? (height, weight etc. should probably be referenced, since they are not mentioned in the article).
    • It's only the height that isn't referenced elsewhere. It is covered by the soccerbase link in external links and isn't normally referenced in other football bios unless there's a discrepancy. Peanut4 (talk) 17:39, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There's no really big issues there, just an "Outside football" section, though you could just rename "Early life" "Personal life". You've probably already thought about pictures, and though not a requirement, it could be useful. I'll put the article on hold for these minor concerns to be addressed. Apterygial talkstalkinsane idea 11:04, 30 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

OK, cool, looks good to me.

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Congratulations. Actually a really good article given the relative lack of info. I'll now stumble around trying to update the relevant sections. Apterygial talkstalkinsane idea 00:08, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much. And thanks for the review. I notice you said it was your first GA review; having done more than 100 reviews myself, I'd like to say well done on a good review (although I suppose it's easy to say that when you've passed it!!). All the best with further reviews. Peanut4 (talk) 00:12, 1 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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