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Reviewer: 1ST7 (talk · contribs) 04:16, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this nomination. Initial comments should be posted soon. --1ST7 (talk) 04:16, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
- I did some copyediting; I hope you don't mind. Here's the review:
- Well-written
- The lead is a little long-winded. Can it be edited down some?
- The subsections under "Other concordant bodies admitting women" and "Quasi-Masonic Rites" are short enough that they don't really need their own section. The former's text could also be fleshed out more.
- Verifiable with no original research:
- The last two sentences of "Elizabeth Aldworth" need a citation.
- Most of the subsections under "Female Masons in 'Masculine Only' Masonic Bodies" are only supported by one source. Can more be added?
- Reference numbers 8 and 9 are to the French Wikipedia, which can't be used as a citation here.
- Broad in its coverage:
- Neutral:
- Stable:
- Illustrated, if possible, by images: