Talk:French battleship Jean Bart (1911)/GA1

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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 16:52, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: Here are some of the bigger changes I made, and some comments related to the review.

  • Upon her return she spent the remainder of the war covering the Otranto Barrage in the Adriatic. → Upon her return she spent the remainder of the war participating in the Otranto Barrage, in the Adriatic.
  • The commander of the Allied naval forces in the Mediterranean decided shortly on a sweep into the Adriatic shortly after the start of the war to surprise the Austrian vessels enforcing a blockade of Montenegro. → Shortly after the start of the war, the commander of the Allied naval forces in the Mediterranean decided to sweep the Adriatic, to surprise the Austrian vessels enforcing a blockade of Montenegro.
  • Again good job. The article meets all prose requirements (concise and clear), as well as those of verifiability and broadness.
  • Images check out.
  • Article is stable.

JonCatalán(Talk) 17:07, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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