Talk:French destroyer Le Terrible/GA1
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 07:30, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
I claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:30, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
- Looks like you touched your own trap again. I can see a British "Draught" again in the article's infobox. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 08:36, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
- I made that mistake with every ship in the class, but they're all fixed now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:49, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
- They returned to Metropolitan France before the end I'm not sure or Metropolitan France is a proper noun?
It's a proper name.
- in late April 1940 in case Italy decided to enter the war Pipe Italy to the Kingdom of Italy.
- I think that Fascist Italy (1922–1943) would be a better link.
- Le Terrible was sent to the Mediterranean at the beginning Link Mediterranean.
- Amusingly, we're on opposite sides of our usual geography link discussions as I think that it is well-enough known not to need a link.
- rest of the year searching for Axis shipping with two of her sisters Link Axis.
- The ships displaced 2,569 metric tons (2,528 long tons) at standard Link both tonnes.
- completed on 1 October 1935 and entered service on 5 February 1936 No 1935 required here.
- Are there links for the not-yet-linked units?
- You'll have to be more specific than that as I'm not seeing anything other than tonnes not linked.
- @Sturmvogel 66: Oh sorry I meant military units. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 08:57, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think that sources in English are good enough to build decent articles on them.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:10, 4 September 2019 (UTC)
- The ships were refitted and then transferred to Alexandria, Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Kingdom of Egypt.
- French West Africa is overlinked.
- eight 20-millimeter (0.8 in) Oerlikon guns were also added You mean cannons?
- French Algeria is over linked.
- on 17 October to rendezvous with the battleship Richelieu at the Azores and escorted Add Portugal after the Azores.
- Link Corsica.
- Ordered on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program --> "Ordered and laid down on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program"? Because the infobox says it was also laid down at the same time.
- My mistake, the infobox was wrong.
- on 28 August where she was decommissioned on 1 September and was used Maybe add a year after 1 September because the infobox says "1 September 1953".
- Typo.
Images
- In the image File:Le_contretorpilleur_le_Terrible.jpg I can see a British post-war.
- Replaced
Source
- Rohwer's book has a little typo in its title. It should be "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War II" instead of "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War Two".
- My copy uses "Two"
- WP:GBOOKS says we should link via an URL link in the books "French Battleships 1922–1956", "French Cruisers, 1922−1956" and "French Destroyers: Torpilleurs d'Escadre & Contre-Torpilleurs 1922–1956".
- There's a bot running around and adding GBook links. I'll let it take care of that.
Infobox
- "Reclassified: As a light cruiser, 28 September 1943" I think you forgot to add this information in the body? It also hasn't a citation which is a little bit OR.
- I did forget.
- "74,000 PS (54,000 kW; 73,000 shp)" The same as above.
- Propulsion part is also forgotten in the body.
- Both of these are in the 1st para of the Design and description section
- Maybe also add the number of crewmen at peacetime into the infobox?
- Nah, they can read the article if they want to find out.
That's anything, a great article, good job. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 21:20, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. It reminded me that I need to be more careful with these before I nominate them and will provide me with a useful checklist of things to look for before I do.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:03, 4 September 2019 (UTC)