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"known as Bashar Jackson," → "known as Bashar Jackson, alongside"
Target Curtis Jackson to 50 Cent, but are you sure that the rapper shouldn't be identified by his stage name in prose since that is what he's widely known as, plus he is mentioned as being sampled later in the same para?
"handled the production." → "solely handled the production."
Not done I think it's fine to mentions that the song was a 2003 single.
Singles are not like albums where the release years are mentioned in the lead of articles referencing them as well as the body; I have fixed this for you. --K. Peake 10:08, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the song's use of "Many Men"." → "its usage of "Many Men (Wish Death)"." because song titles should not be abbreviated, as the rule of people's names does not apply to them
Even though this should be its own para, a sub-section is not needed because it is the only form of promotion
Shouldn't it be mentioned that he was doing tour performances at the point where you said about performing live; 25?
Sadly, Pop Smoke never got to perform this song live because it was never released when he was alive. He only performed songs from his mixtapes. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:05, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until the brief issues are fixed; the review was as just quick as I expected, so the fixes shouldn't take long. --K. Peake 08:12, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss✓Pass after only some brief copy editing; your response was a lot better this time around in comparison to the previous review! --K. Peake 10:08, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]