Talk:Grant Morgan (American football)/GA1

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:48, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Will review later today. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:48, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Fun read! On hold. Over to you. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:23, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@LunaEatsTuna Thanks for the review! I believe everything is taken care of, so it's ready for another look! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:58, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Anytime! Looks great; definitely good enough now to pass. Congrats! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:19, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check[edit]

Earwig gives no concerns.

Prose[edit]

  • The infobox says he was born in Greenwood, Arkansas, but the body says he was born in St. Louis, Missouri.
  • "He played college football at Arkansas" – specify the Arkansas Razorbacks for uninformed readers. Also helpful as just Razorbacks is mentioned later in the lead.
  • "Morgan, the son of" – specify Grant Morgan as first mention in the body.
  • Relatedly, include his birthdate at the end of the aforementioned sentence as well.
  • Wikilink letterwinner.
  • Wikilink redshirting (to somewhere).
  • "and a season-high eight in the last game of the season, against Missouri" – is the comma really necessary here?
  • Wikilink Penn State.
  • "Morgan was named a finalist for the Burlsworth Trophy which is given to the best player in the nation who began their college career as a walk-on, alongside" reads a bit jagged, how about "Morgan was named a finalist for the Burlsworth Trophy – which is given to the best national player who began their college career as a walk-on – alongside" instead?
  • The citation at the end of "alongside Carlton Martial and Stetson Bennett" is unnecessary IMO as the same citation at the very end of the paragraph cites everything all together.
  • "The trophy ceremony was held at the Crystal Bridges Museum of American Art on December 6, 2021" – the year is not necessary here as it is mentioned earlier.
  • In § Professional career, remove the years from the last two dates.

Refs[edit]

Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 2, 10, 12 and 16. Nice work. :]

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